Sunday, November 2, 2008

Xinyi Lin

“Wars, Wars, Wars”: Sylvia Plath’s Use of the War Imagery

Despite of the harshness she had to overcome since childhood, Sylvia Plath accomplished an extraordinary achievement in her career. The traumatic life of this particular well-known confessional poet played a crucial role in her artistic work.
Two of Sylvia Plath’s infamous poems, “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” appeal to the imagery of World War Two, during the Holocaust period, which was one of the cruelest, most inhuman, and traumatic examples of persecution in human history. Sylvia Plath applies this war imagery along with the Holocaustic description in both poems to reveal her disgust towards her father’s death and the suffering she encountered as a result of his death.
In both “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” Sylvia expresses her mixed emotion and disgust towards the death of her father by comparing her father to a German Nazi, as she is the suffering Jew, which shows Holocaustic war imagery. Due to her father’s absence since her early childhood, in “Daddy,” Sylvia exaggerates the effect on her misery which resulted from her father’s death by stating “I thought every German was you...chuffing me off like a Jew” (Daddy 29-32). With the same attitude in “Lady Lazarus,” Sylvia states, “my skin/Bright as a Nazi lampshade…My face a featureless, fine/Jew linen” (Lady Lazarus 5-9). It refers to the fact that the Nazis did “peel off the napkin” (10) as they peel of Jews’ skins to make lampshade. This brutal imagery is used by Sylvia to shows her loathing and the pain which was caused by her father. Both poems indicate that due to the abandonment by her father when she was the age of eight, his death has been haunted Sylvia and she is not able to overcome his death. She constantly suffers with depression and pain, like the Jewish people who were being tortured and persecuted by German Nazis during World War Two. Sylvia describes her father as a cruel dictator who controls her life and, as a result of his death, she will never be able to erase this permanent scar in her heart.
Although both “Lady Lazarus” and “Daddy” shared lots of similarities, there are few differences between those two poems. In “Daddy,” Sylvia uses lots of repetitive references to the war imagery. Such as, “In the German tongue…wars, wars, wars” (Daddy 16-18). The word “Jew” is also used more frequently than in “Lady Lazarus,” such “A Jew to Dachau, Auschwitz, Belsen./ I began to talk like a Jew./ I think I may well be a Jew” (33-35). In contrast, “Jew” only appears one time in “Lady Lazarus,” which is stated in line stanza 4, “Jew linen.” Another difference between these two poems is that Sylvia Plath is not only reveals her resentment towards her father, but also her “replica father”- her husband. Sylvia furthermore uses suffering imagery to describe her husband. In “Daddy,” there is a major shift of the persona that Sylvia is attacking. “If I’ve killed one man, I’ve killed two---/The vampire who said he was you/And drank my blood for a year./Seven years, if you want to know.” When Sylvia changes the subject from her father to her husband, she exposes her disastrous marriage, which made her suffer pain similar to that which she suffered with her father’s death.
Sylvia Plath’s traumatic life experience is a key component for this great confessional poet’s inspirations. Her tragic life is “haunted” by her father’s death and her marriage is an example that she suffers like a Jew. She implies the Holocaustic war imagery in both “Lady Lazarus” and “Daddy” reveals her inner and complex emotions.

Word Count: 604

6 comments:

Hannah said...

1. The language in your essay was very concise. Your use of the zippering technique was really smooth and easy to follow.

2. The parts of your essay that need the most work are your introduction and conclusion, which are both really short. In your intro, you should definitely mention the poems that you will be analyzing, and maybe include a brief description of how you will analyze them. You can also add on to your conclusion by explaining each poems significance separately.
Other than that, there are just a couple of phrases that can be altered to make more sense.
a. Firstly, I don't think that "Holocuastic is a real adjective." In two cases (paragraphs 2 and 4) you use the phrase "Holocaustic war imagery." In those places you can just say "Holocaust imagery."
In the 2nd paragraph, when you say, "the Holocaustic description," you could instead say, "descriptions of the Holocaust," or just "Holocaust imagery" again.
c. In the third paragraph, you refer to Plath's "replica father." You should probably change that to "replicate father," which makes a little bit more sense.
d. Lastly, the sentence in the second paragraph that begins, "In both 'Daddy' and 'Lady Lazarus'" would make more sense if you rephrased it into two sentences, such as: "In both “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” Sylvia demonstrates her mixed emotion and disgust towards the death of her father by using Holocaust imagery. She compares him to a German Nazi, and herself to a suffering Jew." Also, in that sentence, as well as the rest where you say "Sylvia," I would change "Sylvia" to "Plath," since that is more formal.

IB English 1 said...

comment by: Audrey Yang
period 1

I really like how you structured your essay, it makes it really easy to read and get the main points of the essay.
1. I think that you shouldn't start an essay like you did. Since it is the introduction you should introduce the topic first or have a hook that grab the readers attention maybe something like this " Sylvia Plath was a prolific poet, who had accomplished many great things in her career, despite the harshness she had to overcome since childhood."
2. Have someone proof read your essay, because there are some grammer errors in your essay like "his death has been haunted Sylvia" haunted -haunting (in the 3 paragraph).
3."Sylvia Plath is not only reveals her resentment towards her father" take out "is" (in paragraph 4).

IB English 1 said...

Drew Cylinder

1. I liked how you used varied language and compared the poems side by side rather than putting them in separate paragraphs.
2. a It would be nice if your introduction was a little bit longer, and you Thesis is in need of several commas (“The traumatic life of this particularly well-known, confessional poet…). The word particular should be changed to particularly or peculiar, I am not sure which one you want.
b. In your second paragraph, I would take out the word ‘most’ in “…was one of the cruelest, most inhuman, and traumatic…” I would also refrase the first part of the sentence: “Two of Sylvia Plath’s infamous poems, “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” appeal to the imagery of World War Two, during the Holocaust period, which…” I would say: “Two of Sylvia Plath’s most infamous poems, “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” appeal to the imagery of the Holocaust period during World War II, which…”
c. In this phrase: “… father by comparing her father to a German Nazi, as she is the suffering Jew, which shows Holocaustic war imagery…” Take out “which shows Holocaustic war imagery,” it is rather redundant.
d. lengthen your conclusion, it is okay if you repeat some things, maybe a recap on the comparison between the two poems.

Coral Abbott said...

1. Your essay had a very purposeful effective structure to it.
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a. Be careful about your grammar. The first sentence of your essay can be either "Despite the harshness..." or "In despite of the harshness...".
b. In the fifth paragraph, you mention Plath's use of repetition of the word Jew. I felt this was more observation than analysis, and that you could go further in depth with this.
c. Your thesis mentions both war imagery and holocaust imagery. I would recommend just using holocaust imagery, because it is known that the Holocaust occurred during World War II and you seem to focus more on the Holocaust than war.
Overall, you brought up some really good ideas. Keep working and you'll have a great essay!
Coral

IB English 1 said...

1. -You have really good ideas about your topic
- You made conclusions and connections that I wouldn't have thought of
- By using the zippering technique the way you did, made it really easy to follow
2.But I think you can make a few improvements
- I think that although you had good ideas and support for these ideas, I think that you should expand more on a quote if you use one. An example of this is in the first paragraph when you say, "Due to her father’s absence since her early childhood, in “Daddy,” Sylvia exaggerates the effect on her misery which resulted from her father’s death by stating “I thought every German was you...chuffing me off like a Jew” (Daddy 29-32). With the same attitude in “Lady Lazarus,” Sylvia states, “my skin/Bright as a Nazi lampshade…My face a featureless, fine/Jew linen” (Lady Lazarus 5-9).". Instead of using both quotes at once, I would seperate the ideas and expand.
-In your conclusion paragraph you say, "She implies the Holocaustic war imagery in both “Lady Lazarus” and “Daddy” reveals her inner and complex emotions.
", and I think that it was worded a little funny. To fix this you can try changing the phrase "Holocaustic war imagery".
-"Both poems indicate that due to the abandonment by her father when she was the age of eight, his death has been haunted Sylvia and she is not able to overcome his death" I think that this sentence could use revison becasue it is worded funny, and it is a little long.

IB English 1 said...

1. -You have really good ideas about your topic
- You made conclusions and connections that I wouldn't have thought of
- By using the zippering technique the way you did, made it really easy to follow
2.But I think you can make a few improvements
- I think that although you had good ideas and support for these ideas, I think that you should expand more on a quote if you use one. An example of this is in the first paragraph when you say, "Due to her father’s absence since her early childhood, in “Daddy,” Sylvia exaggerates the effect on her misery which resulted from her father’s death by stating “I thought every German was you...chuffing me off like a Jew” (Daddy 29-32). With the same attitude in “Lady Lazarus,” Sylvia states, “my skin/Bright as a Nazi lampshade…My face a featureless, fine/Jew linen” (Lady Lazarus 5-9).". Instead of using both quotes at once, I would seperate the ideas and expand.
-In your conclusion paragraph you say, "She implies the Holocaustic war imagery in both “Lady Lazarus” and “Daddy” reveals her inner and complex emotions.
", and I think that it was worded a little funny. To fix this you can try changing the phrase "Holocaustic war imagery".
-"Both poems indicate that due to the abandonment by her father when she was the age of eight, his death has been haunted Sylvia and she is not able to overcome his death" I think that this sentence could use revison becasue it is worded funny, and it is a little long.

~Linda Tannous