Sunday, November 2, 2008

Nitya Gopinath

Death and misery is an apparent image in Sylvia Plath’s poems. As a child, Sylvia had gone through many tragic experiences like her father’s death and shock treatments to “cure her” of depression. Sylvia only got along with her father and never with her mother and after her father died she felt like she had no point of living or anyone to talk to. In writing her poems, Sylvia usually chooses to talk about her dead father or about her suicide attempts. In “Stillborn” and “Lady Lazarus”, images of death bring out her inner feelings as well as a reflection of her life.
The poem “Stillborn” talks about a stillborn baby and Sylvia’s dead poems. She says “These poems do not live: it’s a sad diagnosis” (Stillborn 1). This is the only line where she talks about her poem in a literal way and then writes about a stillborn baby which alludes to her poem’s death. All throughout the poem, Sylvia writes about the mother’s sadness of carrying the baby for nine months and after she goes through labor the baby is dead. She says “But they are dead, and their mother near dead with distraction” (Stillborn 14). This can be interpreted as the baby being her poems and the mother as Sylvia Plath, poet. The mother/poet is distracted by her depression and other events in her life like her father’s death. She is also confused of what is happening in her life; “They sit so nicely in the pickling fluid! / They smile and smile and smile at me. / And still the lungs won’t fill and the heart won’t start.” She’s wondering why her poems are not great like it used to be and now she is having a difficult time trying to start her magnificent writing but it just won’t start. The first two stanzas are about the mother’s / poet’s sadness and how confused they are but the last stanza is about the mother getting mad and blaming the baby/poem for its death.
In “Lady Lazarus”, Sylvia PLath chooses to talk about her suicide attempts. Lazarus is a biblical illusion to a man named Lazarus, also known as Lazarus of Bethany and one day his sister, Mary and Martha, went to Jesus and told Him that their brother was ill. By the time Jesus could arrive, Lazarus had been in his tomb for four days. Jesus assured Martha that “he that believeth in me, though he were shall never die.” In the presence of a Jewish crowd, Jesus had the stone rolled away from the tomb and bade Lazarus to come out of his tomb. From this point on Lazarus became known as the “man of rebirth” since he came back from the dead. Sylvia Plath uses this biblical allusion to signify her “rebirth” from her suicide attempts. Her first suicide attempt was when she locked herself in the basement of her house, leaving a note saying that she was out with her friend, and swallowed her mother’s pills. She does this after her father died because she did not know how to deal with it. However, her mother hears a noise coming from the basement and finds her daughter lying on the floor and calls the doctor right away saving Sylvia’s life. This is an example of rebirth since she was unconscious at first and then became conscious again.
Sylvia Plath viewed her life unworthy, depressing, and expressed her feelings through her poems. She talks to her dad in some poems trying to come up with a solution of how to deal with her father’s death. This is the only way she could communicate to someone. Due to her depression, images of death are prominent in every one of her poems. Many people view poetry as just another type of art but truly poetry is the only art form in which you can express your feelings through imagery and comparisons.

4 comments:

Unknown said...

1. Like your analysis of "Stillborn." It's a bit different than what was said in class, or at least in first period, and you linked this very well with Plath's life.
2a. In the first sentence, you say, "Death and misery is an apparent image in Sylvia Plath's poems." Rather than saying apparent, I would put obvious. I would also connect how Sylvia only got along with her father to her reason for writing poems to make the sentence flow more.
b. I think you need to do more actual comparing and contrasting. For example, instead of just saying "In "Lady Lazarus," Sylvia Plath chooses to talk about her suicide attempts," you might want to point out how this is different from "Stillborn" and why it matters.
c. Nitpicky stuff:
"She’s wondering why her poems are not great like it used to be and now she is having a difficult time trying to start her magnificent writing but it just won’t start."
better as: "She is wondering why her poems are not as great as they used to be, and describing the difficulty..."
-fix repetition of "start"

Otherwise, really good job!

Unknown said...

Nitya:
I liked your essay’s analysis, and your topic, you brought in a lot of good analysis and original thought, and it is very focused.
1) In writing her poems, Sylvia usually chooses to talk about her dead father or about her suicide attempts. In “Stillborn” and “Lady Lazarus”, images of death bring out her inner feelings as well as a reflection of her life.  I wouldn’t use the word usually, I would say one significant image, and then explain its significance in Plath’s life.
2) “In “Lady Lazarus”, Sylvia PLath chooses to talk about her suicide attempts. Lazarus is a biblical illusion to a man named Lazarus, also known as Lazarus of Bethany and one day his sister, Mary and Martha, went to Jesus and told Him that their brother was ill. By the time Jesus could arrive, Lazarus had been in his tomb for four days. Jesus assured Martha that “he that believeth in me, though he were shall never die.” In the presence of a Jewish crowd, Jesus had the stone rolled away from the tomb and bade Lazarus to come out of his tomb. From this point on Lazarus became known as the “man of rebirth” since he came back from the dead. Sylvia Plath uses this biblical allusion to signify her “rebirth” from her suicide attempts.” In this part of the paragraph you give a lot of background information, I think maybe that should be cut down a bit and focus on the actual wording of the imagery in the poem and it’s significance.
3) “She talks to her dad in some poems trying to come up with a solution of how to deal with her father’s death.” You can expand on this, and perhaps talk about moving on and accepting, and how she tried to fill the voids in her life to lengthen your conclusion?

In your essay, I would split it up by what she is trying to express, rather than poems. For example, her death imagery symbolizes her father, and suicide in the two poems, rather than each poem. Might make it a stronger analysis.

I liked your essay on the whole, good work!
-Alekya

MahaDarshan said...

Darshana Prakasam
Period 4

1. Your knowledge about "Stillborn" is demonstrated through your analysis and interpretation of this text. I liked that you integrated Sylvia Plath's background to further strengthen your argument about the emotions she conveys through her poetry. Overall, I enjoyed reading your essay!

The following are just suggestions that will hopefully help your essay.

2.
a) First off, I think your essay would benefit with a stronger hook or attention grabber. With "Death and misery is an apparent image in Sylvia Plath's poems", it does not bring the reader into the essay. To begin with, I do not think that misery qualifies as an image so you should concentrate on the image of death which maybe causes a lot of misery for Sylvia Plath. You might want to start out with a quote if that is your style or you could start out with a common conception of death and how Sylvia Plath views death. Moreover, with the rest of your introduction, you talk about how much her father impacted her but the rest of the essay does not really relate to this. Since you are not discussing "her dead father", do not mention it because it will distract the reader. Instead, you could use your words to write about bad things in her life and how she uses poetry to express this. This will provide you with a smooth transition to your thesis. With your thesis, you wrote "as well as a reflection of her life" but Lady Lazarus does not really discuss that. So rethink your idea of the theme and you should look back to what you analyze in that body paragraph to find the perfect phrasing for your thesis!

b) For your first body paragraph, you have good analysis but I think a little too much quote integration. You should not write "mother/poet" because it takes away from the professionalism of the essay. Moreover, your overall image is death so I think you should discuss more about death. You have the quotes for it such as " "But they are dead, and their mother is dead with distraction" ". And do not write "this can be interpreted" because it makes you seem unsure of what you are analyzing. Just make it fact! Say something along the lines of "Through this, Sylvia Plath draws a parallel between the baby and her poems and the mother and her, the poet."

c) For your third body paragraph, there is a little too much background and too little analysis. You wrote:

"Lazarus is a biblical illusion to a man named Lazarus, also known as Lazarus of Bethany and one day his sister...since he came back from the dead. "

You could reword this as something like "Lazarus is a biblical reference to Lazarus of Bethany, a man who was brought back to life by Jesus after he had passed away from illness. Through this phenomenal event, he became known as the "man of rebirth"." This is simply a suggestion for phrasing.

You could then move onto talking about how Sylvia Plath chose this specific reference because she relates herself to Lazarus, because she was saved so many times from her suicide attempts. But since she is unhappy about this, analyze it with quote integration. As it is, you do not really talk much about how the poem's images of death impact Sylvia Plath or what she is trying to express.

d) Mrs. Poulsen recommended that we use the zippering technique by having two points and talking about both poems in each paragraph. You might want to consider doing this because it will strengthen your essay and focus your points more. But overall, you may want to take a look at your thesis and see if all that you write strengthens this. This will be a good test to see if you stay on topic and elaborate on certain points enough.

Overall, good job and good luck!

blogger said...

Hey Nitya!
I liked your interpretation of both poems and how you understood them with a precise knowledge of what events they were referring to in her personal life.
However, I feel as if you could have integrated the poems more instead of evaluating them separately.
1)Needs to be more concise, clearer: "She’s wondering why her poems are not great like it used to be and now she is having a difficult time trying to start her magnificent writing but it just won’t start." to "Plath wonders why, despite making many attempts, she is no longer able to write at the level she used to."
2)I changed it to make the meaning of the sentence clearer: "She talks to her dad in some poems trying to come up with a solution of how to deal with her father’s death. " to "Plath addresses her father directly in her poems as a means of dealing with his death"
3)Needs to be improved a little stylistically; write more formally: "However, her mother hears a noise coming from the basement and finds her daughter lying on the floor and calls the doctor right away saving Sylvia’s life. " to "Strange noises began coming from the below the house and later Aurelia, Sylvia's mother, found Plath lying on the floor of the basement; Aurelia called a doctor immediately and Plath's life was saved."
Overall, it is a good essay that needs a bit of work. And keep in mind that these are just suggestions for further improvement and your essay is already good to begin with.