Sunday, November 2, 2008

Ada Lin

Plath and the Body: “Unwrap Me Hand and Foot”
Sylvia Plath has become a leading poet of her time. Many say it is due to her powerful style, usually marked with striking imagery that makes use of figurative language. One repeating motif she uses throughout her poems is the image of body parts, although they produce different effects in different poems. These images of body parts show Plath’s view on certain subjects, but in “The Colossus,” Plath seems to believe that her father’s spirit is connected to the body, while in Lady Lazarus,” she demonstrates a detached feeling about her own flesh.
“The Colossus” is a poem discussing Plath’s feelings towards her father. The title refers to an ancient statue that once stood, straddling a river, now only ruins after an earthquake. The images of body parts in this poem serve to illustrate the importance of Plath’s father in her life, even in his death. For example, in the second stanza, she tells of the monumental task she has labored over, trying “to dredge the silt” from her father’s throat (9). Furthermore, all of the imagery shares one commonality- they are described to be huge. Plath measures the expanse of his brow in acres, and his skull plates are “immense (13-14).” This represents how huge of a figure Otto Plath was to Sylvia, a “Colossus.” In the second to last stanza, she mentions how she seeks shelter behind his left ear (24-25). Even after he is broken down in death, she is still “an ant,” compared to him, seeking shelter from him (12).
In contrast, “Lady Lazarus” focuses on Plath’s desire to die, rather than her connection to a separate person. The mentions of body parts, such as “The nose, the eye pits, the full set of teeth,” mainly serve as connections to the Biblical story of Lazarus, and through it, the anger she feels at being unable to rest in peace (13). Another example would be the line “unwrap me hand and foot,” which refers to when Lazarus is unwrapped from his burial clothes (28). This connection to the Biblical story shows how Plath views her failed suicide attempts as something unexpected, and even unwanted.
However, although in both poems, body parts show Plath’s feelings on certain subjects, in “The Colossus” Plath seems to believe the body is an anchor to the soul. For example, for the first few stanzas, the speaker talks of mending the stature of the Colossus. “I shall never get you put together entirely,” starts the poem (1). This desire to piece together the stature reflects Plath’s desire to bring back her father and have him speak to her again- “Thirty years now I have labored/ To dredge the silt from your throat…(8-9)” This belief that mending the statue will bring her father back to life demonstrates a belief that the body and soul are one and the same.
In contrast, “Lady Lazarus” demonstrates Plath’s detachment to the body. The twenty-fifth stanza reads “Ash, ash----/ You poke and stir/ Flesh, bone, there is nothing there (23-25).” The words “ash, ash” show that her body is only remnants of flame and her flesh and bone are no longer there. However, Plath is still able to speak, addressing the audience, who is poking and stirring the remains. This shows how little Plath needs her body, able to exist without it, and this is emphasized in the second to last line in the poem. “Out of the ash/ I rise with my red air (32-33). “
With the same images of body parts, Plath is able to reveal different facets of her personality. They conveyed her feelings effectively, supporting the themes of the poems. Although they differ in portraying the connection between mind and body, they prove how great a poet Plath is, able to weave multiple layers of meaning in her writing.

2 comments:

hijuice said...

"Body" in your title has multiple meanings; you should specify.
"These images of body parts show Plath’s view on certain subjects, but in “The Colossus,” Plath seems to believe that her father’s spirit is connected to the body, while in Lady Lazarus,” she demonstrates a detached feeling about her own flesh." You should be specific on what certain subjects you're going to talk about in your essay; find some sort of connection between "The Colossus" and "Lady Lazarus".
Good background info on the first paragraph! You do a lot on discussing what the specific quotes mean and what happens with each passing stanza, but perhaps if you look into important specific body parts and pick at their meaning towards Plath, then you could get more of a personal touch from it.
"“The Colossus” Plath seems to believe the body is an anchor to the soul. " is a good analysis. I would suggest comparing Plath's view and what seems to be Otto's view on it being an anchor.
I also wouldn't suggest using the terms "In contrast" twice in the beginning of two different paragraphs. Try wording it differently, or even try completely taking out this phrase.
Good analysis in "Lady Lazarus"! I like how you said "The words “ash, ash” show that her body is only remnants of flame and her flesh and bone are no longer there. ". That was really good!
Your conclusion is short and sweet, which is nice, but I think conclusions should rather end the essay on a good note instead of wrapping things up. You could go off of the last sentence "Although they differ in portraying the connection between mind and body, they prove how great a poet Plath is, able to weave multiple layers of meaning in her writing" by incorporating how Plath twists her many personal touches into the poems and then showing how everyone has a bit of this complex in them.
Good job with your essay!

K said...

I like you're analysis and you have a lot of information. (Is it too long though?)

1. Okay it looks like someone needs to review how to do internal citations! I'm going to give an example from the 2nd paragraph, I think it is. "... his skull plates are 'immense (13-14)." NO. It should be: "... his skull plates are 'immense'(Colossus 13-14)." Citations go directly after quote (usually) and since you are using two poems, you need to cite the poem name. Doing this also allows you to have a lower word count since you dont need to write "In 'The Colossus', Plath writes..." since readers can tell it comes from "The Colossus" from the citation.

2. In your thesis, you say "certain subjects." Your thesis shouldn't be that vague and precise. Try: "These images of body parts show Plath's view on varying topics, but..." This way, it doesn't sound like you need to expand since it varies and would be too much to put in a thesis.

3. In the latter part of your essay, you write "In the twenty-fifth stanza..." If the structure and stanza number has no meaning to your analysis, then don't include. Readers can already tell where the exerpt is in the poem from your internal citation. And yes, you need to fix that internal citation as well.

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