Sunday, November 2, 2008

Ben Tausheck

The Art of War
The images of war and violence often conjures up feelings of tragedy, pain, or hatred. In Sylvia Plath’s poems Lady Lazarus and Daddy, the images of war (specifically the holocaust) appear quite frequently. Plath uses these images to convey and accentuate certain points of views and ideas about a certain topic. By using war images in both poems Plath is able to portray people in a villainous style. The war references also are symbolic for the pain that Sylvia had suffered in her life. Both these poems have texts containing content about war, violence, and the holocaust which she uses to paint her hatred and her anguish.
Sylvia Plath lived with a lot of resentment and anger in her life. When she was young, her father who was her closest, most powerful, yet abusive figure died and caused her to feel abandoned. The poem Daddy is a text where Sylvia explains her hatred and her grievances against her dead father. “Daddy, I have had to kill you./ You died before I had time—“ (Daddy 5-6). Though Sylvia Plath never actually killed her father, the harshness of the word kill displays the animosity that Sylvia has for her father in this poem. She later goes on to explain how she thought of her father, “I made a model of you,/A man in black with a Meinkampf look”(Daddy 64-65). This passage further demonizes her father because of the Meinkampf reference. Meinkampf was a book written by Adolph Hitler who was responsible for the deaths of millions of innocent people and all his ideas and philosophies about slaying “undesirables” were illustrated in Meinkampf. So by directly relating her father to Hitler’s book, she casts a shadow over any goodness her father might have had. In Lady Lazarus, there is one reference to the holocaust that has to do with hatred. “So, so, Herr Doktor./ So, Herr Enemy.” (65-66). Here Plath is talking to the doctors that keep striving to bring her back to life after her encounters with death. She uses the word “Herr” which is German for sir or master. By using Herr, she is trying to make it seem like she is talking to a Nazi. She never wanted to be saved and she laments about that earlier in the poem. She hates the doctors for forcing her to live and relates them to nazi doctors who preformed cruel experiments on their subjects against their will.
Plath also uses war and the holocaust to symbolize pain and cruelty. In Lady Lazarus she talks about her the sadness of only being an experiment for doctors and nothing more than items to the world. “A sort of walking miracle, my skin/ Bright as a Nazi lampshade,/ My right foot/ A paperweight,/ My face a featureless, fine/ Jew linen.” (Lady Lazarus 4-9). There was a myth about experiments that the Nazi doctors conducted on Jews in concentration camps. The Nazi lampshade (a lampshade made of skin), the right foot being a paperweight, and the Jew linen are all alluding to those experiments. She uses these war and body images to show the reader the pain she feels at just being an experiment for doctors. She also has another pain reference later in the poem. “The pure gold baby/ That melts to a shriek. /I turn and burn.” (Lady Lazarus I like cake). The images of burning and melting are allusions to the crematoriums and are meant to show the severity of her suffering. The baby is a sign of innocence that was so cruelly destroyed. Daddy has a holocaust image very much like this one. “Every woman adores a Fascist,/ The boot in the face, the brute”(48-49). In this case, she refers to her father as a German fascist who were known for their absolute cruelty. The boot in the face is the pain inflicted onto her by her father and the first part about adoring a fascist is Plath stating that she only wanted to be close to her father and that she was innocent and he hurt her just out of malice. “The tongue stuck in my jaw./ It stuck in a barb wire snare.” (25-26), is another testament to her father’s abuse. She uses the barb wire phrase to illustrate a painful and constricting image. Plath chose these words to show us how horrible her experience was.
Both these poems contained a large amount of war and holocaust images which were used to amplify Sylvia’s emotions. These allusions an images of war lend great strength to the poem; painting powerful pictures and projecting emotions and feelings with great clarity. Plath’s mastery of imagery was what made both those poems so touching and so powerful.

3 comments:

IB English 1 said...

Hello there Ben. This is Carissa. I would like to say your essay was really good and interesting. I liked the in depth anaylsis of each qoute you used, specifically the history and it's correlation to the poems. But I have to give you three critiques so here they go:
1. In the opening sentence of paragraph 2 you say, "...who was her closest, most powerful, yet abusive figure died.." This sentence is pretty long and wordy. Since Mrs. Poulsen is a stickler on being concise, I would recommend changing this to "who was her closest yet most abusive figure died.."

2.Also in paragraph 2 you wrote, "The poem Daddy is a text where Sylvia explains her hatred and her grievances against her dead father." This comes off a bit repetitive because in the sentence before you had already mentioned some of her resentment towards her father.Maybe you could change it to something like, "This hatred and greivence towards her father is reflected in Sylvia's poem 'Daddy'".

3. Make sure you put all the poem titles either in qoutes or italicized because MLA will hunt you down if you don't. Also it gets confusing when you write "Daddy" with no qoutes and I start thinking you are talking about her Daddy, which is a weird way to refer to Otto Plath.

You essay was well organized and informative and keep doing your thang!
-Carissa :)

Kaitlyn said...

Hello :] It's Kaitlyn.
I liked the topic you picked for your essay, it's very you.

1. "The images of war and violence often conjures up feelings of tragedy, pain, or hatred." I think this would sound better without the initial "the", and change "conjures" to "conjure", since it's an opening sentence.

2. "“The pure gold baby/ That melts to a shriek. /I turn and burn.” (Lady Lazarus I like cake). " Why in the world does it say i like cake there?

3. "allusions an images of war lend great strength to the poem" -- should be "and"

IB English 1 said...

hello benjamín, well id just lke to say taht overalll yourr essay was quite good though id say it was a little wordy at times, howerver there are a few things I think should realy improve.

I think a big thing you need to work on is bringing your paragraphs and analysis back to your theisis, I felt that often times your anlayiss was getting off topic, also your theisis itself is quite hazy and unclear as to what is the exact thing you are trying to prove

On that point I feel your thisis should be more consisese and statatory heres what I think could be a more conises version "In slyvia Plaths poemes 'Daddy' and 'Lady lazurus' holocaust and war imigry are used to both villinaze people and to paint a picture of her hate and anguish"

Also as relating to your thesis I felt that your conclution realy relay needs to be breought back to your theisis and to be relatied to the world I guess, beacause I feel like you need more of the "so what" aspect of the concluiton

all in all this essay needs only a few changes to make it very a very strong essay