Sunday, November 2, 2008

Holly Addington

“This is the time of hanging on”: No Food, No Happiness

Sylvia Plath utilizes something common to all of us to communicate her feelings; food, something that we all need to sustain ourselves. Plath uses images of food throughout her poems, although she often only uses it once in a poem. In “Mushrooms” and “Wintering” images of food show unhappiness due to unreachable abundance, crumbs of a need, and artificial replacements.

Being in abundance means that there is plenty of it, yet when it is unreachable a person often becomes frustrated trying to get it. Plath tells us “I have my honey, / Six jars of it, / . . . in the wine cellar” (“Wintering” 3-5). At this point in the poem the reader has no reason to see this as anything but good. There is plenty of honey, and it keeps well, but we find out “this is the room I could never breathe in.” (“Wintering” 12). This keeps the abundant honey out of her reach, it is in an unreachable place and this does not please her. Plath bought bees in order to have abundant honey, and now it will go to waste for she cannot get it, and this causes her to be unhappy. Plath shows this again when she tells us that women are “Bland-mannered, asking / Little or nothing.” (“Mushrooms” 21-22). The women can see the abundance that men have. The men rule the world and do not let women follow their dreams; dreams that would make them truly happy.

Abundance may not be able to be reached, but usually a necessity such as food is still given, if only in crumbs. “Diet on water, / On crumbs of shadow,” (“Mushrooms” 19-20) tells the reader how little they have. The word “diet” can be taken to understand that they have very little water. Shadow, taking on a food quality, is in small amounts, there is little to consume. Women here are standing in man’s shadow and can only come closer to him a little bit at a time. They need more, and are unhappy with how little they have. The bees in “Wintering” also have less and they must “make up for the honey I’ve taken.” (26). The abundance was stolen away from them and now must work hard to survive on the little they have. The bees worked all year to get their honey, and now they have very little and this makes them “so slow” (“Wintering” 23) with unhappiness. Drinking a few sips of water when parched only makes the drinker thirstier and in more want of water.

The bees must use an artificial replacement for the honey Plath has taken in “Wintering”, “It is Tate and Lyle they live on, instead of flowers. / They take it.” (29). The bees are reluctant to live on this replacement of syrup. Honey is what they want and the replacement only makes them miss it more. The “crumbs of shadow” in “Mushrooms” are only part of what the mushrooms want (20). They not only want to have shadow, they want to have the spotlight. “Our foot’s in the door.” (“Mushrooms” 33) they say. The women are ready to stop living on shadow, something only part of what they want, and to start living on light. These artificial replacements for the mushrooms and the bees are not satisfying. They cause unhappiness and simply more want. Coffee drinkers know that instant coffee is not near as good as freshly brewed coffee. The artificial replacement of shadow for light sates the want but not for long; the sugar the bees are using will serve until the flowers come into bloom again.

The unhappiness in these two poems is quite prevalent. The food imagery shows just how important the wants are, in fact they are needs. When the “food” is out of play, unhappiness abounds. Without this need, there is no reason for anyone to be happy.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

1. I like your thesis. It shows that you have an excellent interpretation and understanding of the works, especially of ones we didn't do in class.
2. a. Rather small things:
- I don't think you are supposed to address the reader, so don't say "Sylvia Plath utilizes something common to all of us..." but rather "Sylvia Plath utilizes something vital to everything..." or something similar. This also turns up in the second paragraph: "Plath tells us..." etc.
- run on sentence: " This keeps the abundant honey out of her reach, it is in an unreachable place and this does not please her." Either split these sentences up into two or separate them with a semicolon.
b. REPETITION! "Abundance" is one example, and words such as "want" or "need." One example: "In "Mushrooms" and "Wintering" imagges of food show unhappiness due to unreachable abundance, crumbs of a need, and artificial replacements.Being in abundance means..."That's twice in the same number of sentences, and it turns up I think five times in the second paragraph. Other words could be excess,surplus, etc. Other words for "want" and "need" can be desire, craving, etc.
c. I think you can add more emphasis in comparison and contrast, such as the different ways the images add to the themes. Also, " Plath bought bees in order to have abundant honey, and now it will go to waste for she cannot get it, and this causes her to be unhappy." THis sentence doesn't flow as well due to the "and"s. Perhpas this will work better: "Plath bought bees in order to have abundant honey, and due to her inability to get it, it will now go to waste, causing her to be unhappy."

Sarah said...

1. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your essay because it demonstrated a lot of knowledge and analysis about the extract. I never thought of food having this much significance in Plath's poetry, especially since this wasn't something we really discussed in class. Also, I thought your argument was clear and focused. It stayed true throughout your essay.
2.
a. "Sylvia Plath utilizes something common to all of us to communicate her feelings; food, something that we all need to sustain ourselves.". This is a really awkward sentence to start your essay with, in part, because its incomplete. A complete sentence should follow the semicolon. Maybe you could change it to, " Food is a necessary staple that we all need to sustain ourselves and Sylvia Plath effectively uses food to convey her feelings."
b. "Shadow, taking on a food quality, is in small amounts, there is little to consume." is another line in your essay that doesn't quite make sense. It is also disconnected to your paragraph in general. I was confused when you suddenly referred to the "shadow" and I didn't know what that was until I got to the later paragraphs, where I assumed the "shadow" in the two paragraphs was the same. You could change it to: "Shadows, in Plath's poetry, takes on a food-like quality and because it is in small amounts, there is little to consume."
c."The food imagery shows just how important the wants are, in fact they are needs." Another sentence that doesn't quite make sense. You could change this to "Food imagery underlines the importance of wants that are, in fact, needs."

Good luck on your essay. You have a great argument, just fix a couple of sentences and wording here and there.