Saturday, November 1, 2008

Alex Yamamoto

“I think I may well be a Jew”: Holocaust Imagery in Sylvia Plath’s Poetry
“I may be a bit of a Jew” (“Daddy”, 40). Sylvia Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery is not uncommon within her poetry. It effectively highlights her dark and deathly tones by giving vivid imagery that could connect with any reader. By relating her own personal experience to that of the Jews, the amount of pain and anguish she felt is passed on to the reader. In “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” Holocaust images show suffering and relationships Plath had.
Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery invokes many emotions to the reader. More specifically in both “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus,” Plath uses it to compare her suffering to the Jews and says, “I think I may well be a Jew” (“Daddy”, 35). She describes the suffering she felt when she says, “my skin / Bright as a Nazi lampshade” (“Lazarus”, 4-5), which is an allusion to the rumor that Nazis used Jew’s skin as lampshades. However, differences exist between the poems because in “Daddy” her suffering is physical pain, while in “Lady Lazarus” her suffering is mental. When trying to show physical pain, Plath uses the most vivid image of the Holocaust, “A Jew, to Dachau, Aushwitz, Belsen” (“Daddy”, 33). By directly referring to the concentration camps where Jews were inflicted with the most horrendous pain, Plath successfully shows the pain her father and husband caused her. While for mental suffering, she says, “That melts like a shriek” (“Lazarus”, 70), which uses the fact that Jews were killed in ovens to show the pain and suffering she feels within herself. Not only do the Holocaust images show suffering, they also show relationships Plath has.
In both “Daddy” and “Lady Lazarus” she shows relationships of resent and hatred. While “Daddy” is the relationship that Plath has with her father, “Lady Lazarus” is her relationship with death. Plath shows her hatred through Nazi imagery when she says, “I have always been scared of you, / With your Luftwaffe” (“Daddy”, 41-42). By directly comparing herself to the Jews and her father to the Nazis, the amount of resent and hatred seen is paramount. These images greatly enhance the dark tone of the poem and the theme of how she hates her father. In “Lady Lazarus” it is clearly seen that she is talking about suicide when she says, “like a cat I have nine times to die” (21). However Holocaust images enhance the feeling of death when she says, “I do it [commit suicide] so it feel like hell” (46). Just like the Nazi’s brutally tortured the Jews, Plath tortured herself, but unlike most Jews Plath survived her ordeals.
Plath’s Holocaust images have caused controversy because she is comparing her own experiences to the Jews of the Holocaust, even though she herself never experienced what they went through. However, even when taking that into account, her inclusion of Holocaust images greatly enhances the tone and the theme of her poetry and influences the reader greatly.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Dear Mr. Yamamoto,

You have a very well written essay. You have a purposeful and effective structure to your response. It was focused, coherent, and presented in persuasive manner. You managed to keep it concise and get all your points across in an orderly manner.

There were, however, some improvements that need to be made:

1. In the second sentence of your opening paragraph, you state,

“Sylvia Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery is not uncommon within her poetry.”

The use of a double negative is not necessary and you can make the sentence more concise by saying:

“Sylvia Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery is common throughout her poetry.”

2. In the first sentence of your first body paragraph, you state,

“Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery invokes many emotions to the reader.”

You say “many emotions” but in the paragraph, you primarily focus on “pain and suffering.” Many emotions could also be taken to mean, happiness, sorrow, jubilation, etc. You can specify this, by adding “of pain and suffering” to sentence:

“Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery invokes many emotions of pain and suffering to the reader.”

3. The last correction you need to make is from the concluding paragraph of your second body paragraph, in which you state,

“Not only do the Holocaust images show suffering, they also show relationships Plath has.”

Plath’s relationship with who? Be specific to state that it is with her father. A reader might take this statement to refer to her other family members, friends, etc.
You can change the sentence to:

“Not only do the Holocaust images show suffering, they also show relationship Plath had with her father.”

Kaitlyn said...

1. I like the use of a quote as an opener, but you might want to have more of a transition bewtween that and the second sentence, to make it sound smoother.

2. In your essay you say " which uses the fact that Jews were killed in ovens to show the pain and suffering " You might want to say "Crematoriums" instead of ovens. It's more precise.

3. "By directly comparing herself to the Jews and her father to the Nazis, the amount of resent and hatred seen is paramount." It would sound better if you said resentment instead of just resend.

Anonymous said...

SR. Yamamoto,


I like how concise and precise your essay is, and i agree with daniel that it was focused and coherent.

I think some specific portions could have been altered for the better.

1. In the sentence "Plath’s use of Holocaust imagery invokes many emotions to the reader." I believe this sentence should be combined with the sentence after it to be a complete sentence that is more substatial.

2. I also think that your conclusion could be more thought out, and it can also be expanded to inclue ALL of the ideas in your paper.

3. Formatting wise, u need to indent your paragraphs.