Saturday, November 1, 2008

Vicky Tu

"Legends and Myths"
In Sylvia Plath’s poetry, constant allusions to various myths and legends can be found throughout. In “The Colossus”, Plath describes the way her father had a huge role in her life and how she felt betrayed by his death. In “Two Sisters of Persephone”, Plath laments that women, even the “happy” ones, are all treated badly and lead sorrowful lives. In “Ariel”, Plath writes about the illusion of freedom and how it is not really freedom at all. Sylvia Plath uses various mythological references throughout her poetry, especially in the three poems “The Colossus”, “Two Sisters of Persephone”, and “Ariel”, to express her unhappiness.
In “The Colossus”, Plath’s father is portrayed as a man of enormous significance that Plath, after her father’s death, attempted to piece back together. The very title of the poem alludes to The Colossus, a monumental statue that ships would sail between its legs to reach the other side. Plath’s father was, figuratively, The Colossus in Plath’s life as he was a prominent and imposing figure. In addition, Plath mentions the Oresteia in the fourth stanza: “A blue sky out of the Oresteia / Arches above us. O father, all by yourself / You are pithy and historical as the Roman forum.” The Oresteia was a trilogy of tragedies that involved numerous betrayals as a husband sacrificed his daughter and is consequently murdered by his wife. Plath, too, felt betrayed by her father as he died. Plath references the Colossus and the Oresteia in her poem “The Colossus” in a negative connotation, much like she did in “Two Sisters of Persephone”.
“Two Sisters of Persephone” is about two seemingly opposite women; one woman is unhappy and forced to work all day while the other woman frolics in the sun. Again, the title of the poem is a mythological reference to Persephone, the Greek goddess who was forced to marry Hades and return to the Underworld every year for a short period of time. Using this imagery, Plath is stating that while there are happy times in a woman’s life, unhappiness will always be there, as well. Plath mentions the two opposite sides of women in the first stanza. “Two girls there are within the house / One sits; the other, without / Daylong a duet of shade and light / Plays between these.” Here, Plath contrasts the two women, representative of the two sides of a woman’s life. Plath continues on to describe the “happy” side of a woman’s life: “Bronzed as earth, the second lies, / Hearing ticks blown gold / Like pollen on bright air. Lulled / Near a bed of poppies, / She sees how their red silk flare / Of petaled blood / Burns open to the sun’s blade.” However, even within this woman’s happy life, sadness and pain are still present in her life as the poppies’ “red silk flare of petaled blood burns open to the sun’s blade”. Then, Plath mentions the unhappier side to women: “…Turned bitter / And sallow as any lemon / The other, wry virgin to the last, / Goes graveward with flesh laid waste, / Worm-husbanded, yet no woman.” Plath felt that, no matter how happy a woman may seem, she is secretly unhappy and will always be unhappy, much like how she discusses a women never being free in her poem “Ariel”.
In “Ariel”, Plath describes how she tries to escape the world by taking rides on her horse, Ariel. Furthermore, the title of the poem itself is a reference to the story of “The Little Mermaid”. In the true ending of “The Little Mermaid”, the mermaid throws herself off a cliff and disappears into sea foam. In addition, the first two lines of the eighth stanza allude to “The Little Mermaid”, as well. “And now I / Foam to wheat, a glitter of seas.” Using this reference, Plath is saying that true freedom does not really exist, and anything that may feel like freedom will always carry an underlying theme of oppression and frustration as one attempts to escape. Plath also references the story of Lady Godiva in the seventh stanza: “White / Godiva, I unpeel --- / Dead hands, dead stringencies.”. According to the legends, Lady Godiva was married to a man who heavily taxed his people. They appealed to Lady Godiva to beg her husband to cut back on the taxes, which she did, but he refused to listen to her. Finally, after numerous requests, Lady Godiva’s husband said he would lift the taxes if she would demean herself by riding naked through the streets, which she did. In relation to the story, while the line may seem to be about letting go and being free, Plath is actually using it in a connotation of oppression by men. Thus, Plath is using mythological references to convey her unhappiness.
The poems “The Colossus”, “Two Sisters of Persephone”, and “Ariel” all use references to myths or legends to convey Plath’s unhappiness. “The Colossus” was about the significance of her father and the impact it left on her. “Two Sisters of Persephone” was about the inevitable unhappiness in a woman’s life, and “Ariel” was about freedom not truly existing. Sylvia Plath uses the mythological references in these poems to convey her sorrow at the world.

Word Count: 881

2 comments:

Percy Chan said...

1. First off, i thought you did a good job making the essay clear and reinforced through the use of quotations and such. Although, I'm not sure but i thought we were only supposed to use two poems for the analysis.

2. a) First thing is first, after looking at the other essays, it is indeed my conclusion that you were supposed to be using two poems instead of three.

b) "The Colossus, a monumental statue" in the second paragraph, the actual name would be the Colossus of Rhodes. I think its important to get the names correct for this essay.

c) I think the conclusion should be more explaining why the imagery was important and not a summarization of what the imagery means. Instead of "The poems “The Colossus”, “Two Sisters of Persephone”, and “Ariel” all use references to myths or legends to convey Plath’s unhappiness" you could have Without the avid use of Mythological references the poems would not have been as effective in portraying Plath's unhappiness. We can see this..(Etc. Etc.)

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Sharvani Srivastava
Period 1

1. I think you had an excellent knowledge of not only the themes of the three poems you chose, but also of the mythology since you explained the references really well for those who may not know much about mythology. You had a clearly focused argument and your organization was logical. the quotes you chose really fit into what you needed to analyze the theme of the poems as affected by mythology.

2.a. I know that Mrs. Poulsen told us to use the Zippering Technique, but I'm not sure how you would use the Zippering Technique for your essay. I think to do so, you would have to change your thesis so that instead os saying "Sylvia Plath uses various mythological references throughout her poetry" and instead compare the usage of mythological references in each poem. You only need to do this, if you feel the need to use the Zippering Technique. Otherwise, I think your structure is effective.
b. "Plath continues on to describe the “happy” side of a woman’s life: “Bronzed as earth, the second lies, / Hearing ticks blown gold / Like pollen on bright air. Lulled / Near a bed of poppies, / She sees how their red silk flare / Of petaled blood / Burns open to the sun’s blade.” However, even within this woman’s happy life, sadness and pain are still present in her life as the poppies’ “red silk flare of petaled blood burns open to the sun’s blade”." This gets a little repetitive since you use a quote, and then use part of the quote again, this kind of limits the effectiveness of the quote. To make a stronger impact I think you should split the quote in two, since it will actually show a sharp contrast, rather just restated something, and it will take out the repetition. My suggestion would be to say, "Plath continues on to describe the “happy” side of a woman’s life: “Bronzed as earth, the second lies, / Hearing ticks blown gold / Like pollen on bright air. Lulled / Near a bed of poppies". However, even within this woman’s happy life, sadness and pain are still present in her life as the poppies’ “red silk flare of petaled blood burns open to the sun’s blade”." This even reduces your word count a little!
c. "The poems “The Colossus”, “Two Sisters of Persephone”, and “Ariel” all use references to myths or legends to convey Plath’s unhappiness." I think that though restating your thesis may be a good thing to reinforce your ideas, but I think you should rephrase this so it does not sound like your thesis exactly. Your conclusion should show the "so what?" factor, meaning how the use of these allusions affects the audience or Plath's personal life. So instead your topic sentence could be something like "The use of mythological allusions in "The Colossus", "Two Sisters of Persephone", and "Ariel" allow the audience to appreciate the level of Plath's unhappiness giving the audience a basis to compare to". This is just a suggestion sentence, so just change it around for your style.
d. Last but not least, a small comment your title "Legends and Myths" does not follow our template for titles. Though I like it you may want to change it a little to something like "Legends and Myths: The Effect of Mythology on Sylvia Plath's Poetry".

I really liked your essay since it was different and not many did allusions to mythology. It was a really good essay, and all the above are suggestions only! Good job!