Sunday, November 2, 2008

Tova Lichman

The Bare Truth: Images of Nakedness and Clothing

As the famous novelist and poet Caesare Pavese once wrote, “Love - any love - reveals us in our nakedness, our vulnerability, and our nothingness.” Pavese’s concept of nakedness plays a reoccurring theme in much of Sylvia Plath’s poetry. However, portrayal of the motif nakedness in her works gives hidden meaning and shines a new light onto the ideas associated with it. The new light is especially prevalent when compared to traditionally accepted symbols of nakedness. Plath’s poetry is a perfect example of confessional poetry. This is a style of poetry in which the author writes about their own problems and their own thoughts and feelings. Plath is able to reflect the traditional view, along with additional personal feelings and emotions through use of the symbol of nakedness. Plath’s use of the image of nakedness emphasizes her overpowering feminist views and her personal feelings about marriage.
Plath demonstrates her feminist views in the poem titled “Ariel”. In this poem, she alludes to the story of Lady Godiva. The poem reads, “White/ Godiva, I unpeel---/ Dead hands, dead stringencies”. (5-6) The legend of Lady Godiva is about young beautiful woman whose husband is the wealthy mayor of the town. He wants to impose a high and unfair tax to the residents of the town, but his wife sides with the people. Lady Godiva makes her husband an offer. She agrees that she will ride through the town naked if he will not tax the citizens. So, as the story goes, Lady Godiva decrees that all windows in the town shall be shut, sheds her clothes, and rides through the center of the town naked. This legend is a stunning example of feminist power, and of a woman sacrificing herself for the greater good of all the townspeople. Plath compares herself to the Lady Godiva because she feels that she is able to take control of her life and make a difference. In this sense, her nakedness is a form of liberation. She is freed from her bonds as a married woman, and has shed her restrictive clothes. This exemplifies both Plath’s feminist views and the negative light in which she views marriage.
Furthermore, in the poem “The Applicant”, the main theme of the poem is marriage. Plath is trying to convey the idea of marriage as a sale between a man and a woman. The speaker sounds like an auctioneer, talking hastily and advertising their product: the women for sale to be married and sold off. The poem reads, “I notice you are stark naked. / How about this suit ----/ Black and stiff, but not a bad fit” (19-21). The speaker, or salesperson, graciously offers the suit to the naked man. In this case, the suit is a symbol of the ties and bonds of marriage. Plath describes the suit as stiff. Before the man is married, he is stark naked, and has nothing. But, with marriage, the man gains a loving wife to take care of him, purchasing his suit. In this case, Plath is showing how marriage is sometimes forced and people can be forced to make rash decisions. The suit is stiff and uncomfortable, yet the salesperson still convinces the man to buy it. Later on in the poem, the man will realize the utter permanence and bondage of his decision. On line 25 the auctioneer assures him, “Believe me, they’ll burry you in it”.
Plath plays with the themes of nakedness and clothing to symbolize liberation and constriction respectively. In “Ariel”, Plath becomes Lady Godiva, a goddess of woman’s rights. She stands as a symbol for women to take action and to be free. While in the poem “The Applicant”, Plath uses nakedness to symbolize vulnerability and instability. Also using the image of clothing to represent the restrictiveness of the bonding ties of marriage. All together, images of nakedness in these works represent Plath’s feminist views and her opinions on the emphasis of the importance of marriage.
Word Count: 669

3 comments:

IB English 1 said...

Well I enjoyed reading this. Very thorough knowledge of work, and I really liked how you started it off with a quote from another person. I don’t know who he is, but it was a good quote for the subject. Everything really seemed to flow well together, although I would suggest combining the last two sentences of the first paragraph.
As for the analysis, I didn’t understand what the quote used for Ariel had to do with the subject, other than the word unpeel. I think that it would be a good place to insert a quote from the poem that tells something about the legend you mention. That seems to be what you’re really analyzing in that paragraph. In the same realm, I really liked how you were able to talk about just one quote from “The Applicant” for the entire paragraph. That really showed in depth thinking and good knowledge.
-Evan Bare

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Unknown said...

This essay was very well written and was very enjoyable to read. Your introduction more specifically was able to hook your read and is a great beginning to your essay

A few changes I would suggest:
1) Since most of your essay had great language, I can't really give you specific lines to change but one aspect of your essay i would change is your structure. I liked reading this essay but Mrs. Poulsen specifically said to use both essays in both paragraphs. I would make your first body paragraph more concise and then compare The Applicant in as well.
2) I would also find some more quotes to back up your idea of nakedness in these poems. You should use at least two quotes from each poem to show the read Plath really uses this image to show her feminist views as well as marriage.
3)One last small aspect i would suggest to change is that for your thesis i would add the names of the poems you are using, so instead of "Plath’s use of the image of nakedness emphasizes her overpowering feminist views and her personal feelings about marriage." i would use "Plath’s use of the image of nakedness in her poems "Ariel" and "The Applicant" emphasizes her overpowering feminist views and her personal feelings about marriage." or something to that effect.

This essay was very enjoyable to read and you should be able to make it into a great essay

-Sujay Pathak Period 5