Saturday, November 1, 2008

Joe Benson

Sylvia Plath’s short life was surrounded by death; her father’s, her child’s, and a few of her own attempts, to name a few. Ironically, in her poetry she does not seem to take it seriously. Instead she uses the image of death to add dark humor to her poems.
Plath sees the death of her father as a suicide because he could have gotten treatment for his illness but chose not to until it was too late for him to be saved. She sees his death as his exit off the stage of her life, but instead of letting go and moving on, she feels compelled to follow him into his death. She was eight years old when her father died and that was the same year she first attempted to take her own life. In her poem “Daddy” she says, “At twenty I tried to die and get back back back to you.” She is referencing how again at age twenty she tried to take her own life to escape to her father. Plath fails to see that after death there is nothing and that killing herself would be fruitless, but she romanticizes the concept to enhance the themes of death in her writings.
In addition to her overly romantic view of death, she jokes about it as well. In “Lady Lazarus” she writes, “I have done it again. One year in every ten I manage it.” She humors herself by pointing out how every decade she tries to take her own life. Ironically, in “Lady Lazarus” she wrote, “Dying is an art, like everything else, I do it exceptionally well. I do it so it feels like hell. I do it so it feels real.” The irony is that she has attempted suicide twice already and she has not been able to kill herself but she says that she does it exceptionally well. She fails to see the gravity of death and that once she takes one too many pills or lays next to the oven for just one more minute, it will all be over.
Overall Sylvia Plath does not take death seriously. Again in “Lady Lazarus” she says, “I am only 30. And like the cat I have nine times to die.” She thinks she is invincible and that she can attempt suicide seven more time and then die. Unfortunately, Sylvia died on her third attempt when she was only 31. If only she saw that death was not a joke, but truly an end to all things. Maybe then she would still be among the living today.

3 comments:

Jessica Donnachie said...

1. I like how you talk about the irony. For example how she says “Dying is an art, like everything else, I do it exceptionally well," and then you mentioned how she has failed twice.

2. -maybe give a little more background in the intro
-"Sylvia Plath’s short life was surrounded by death; her father’s, her child’s, and a few of her own attempts, to name a few." I think you could take out the "to name a few" because it is unnecessary.
-the thesis could be a little clearer.

Unknown said...

-Plath sees the death of her father as a suicide because he could have gotten treatment for his illness but chose not to until it was too late for him to be saved run on? maybe split into two different sentences

- She thinks she is invincible and that she can attempt suicide seven more time and then die. she beleives she is*

-If only she saw that death was not a joke, but truly an end to all things. Maybe then she would still be among the living today. If she had only seen that death is not a joke, but an end to allt hings, maybe then would she be among the living today

-good, interesting ideas but is this in the word count?

Anonymous said...

You had very varied and creative style of writing. Your use of language makes your essay very interesting and fun to read.

In your first sentence, "Sylvia Plath’s short life was surrounded by death; her father’s, her child’s, and a few of her own attempts, to name a few." began very strong, but I think the ending should be altered a little. Maybe, instead of saying 'and a few of her own attempts' you could say something like 'and eventually her own'. Also, I don't think the 'to name a few' is necissary. I think the sentence is plenty strong without it.

For your quotes, you do not have internal citations. Those need to be included so that we can see where you got them. Also, with quotes, when Plath changes a line, you need to include a '/'.
EG:
Your quote format:
“At twenty I tried to die and get back back back to you.”
MLA Format:
"At twenty I tried to die / And get back, back, back to you" (Daddy, 58-59).

I think that your last paragraph should not be your conclusion, but your third argument point. You bring up a new topic when you say, "Sylvia Plath does not take death seriously. Again in “Lady Lazarus” she says, “I am only 30. And like the cat I have nine times to die.”" This is a good point and I think you should elaborate on it. Generally, you do not bring up a new point in your conclusion, you just re-itterate your overall argument. I think with a little more analysis, this could be a very strong point.

(Comment by Bethany Draeger)